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~Ja-mes

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I am a writer looking for (constructive!) criticism on a few pieces of my work. So no pictures (sorry...!), but an opportunity to exercise your imagination.
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After the Storm.

Sat Mar 23, 2013, 4:32 AM


Remarkable, really, how life goes on.

I have a few things to say!

1) My piece 'Stranger on Sandy Neck Beach' got my second DLD a couple weeks back!

Stranger on Sandy Neck Beach“Let's give it another go, son.”

Jamie looked as if he was in physical pain; his eyes were almost closed with frustration, and his hands were clasped together behind his head.

“I give up, Dad. Let's just leave it.”

The raft was watertight - Damien knew it, even if his son did not.

“Come on, Jamie. We've worked on this for almost two hours now. Don't give up!”

Jamie fixed his Dad with a stare that looked like it would wilt any plant life unfortunate enough to be caught within his line of angry, brooding sight.

“Dad, we've found what is clearly the most buoyant wood on this beach. We've tied it to


It was a much welcome encouragement during a rough time.


2) I've entered some stuff for some contests. And stuff.

For #SixWordStories, a group I recently joined, I offer this to their 'Open Theme' contest:

The IntrovertAlone I am weaker, but safe.

For #LiteratureforPoints' Easter 2013 contest, I offer this small romance:

Easter 2013: 16:34 at Jo Smith's.The doorbell... What an annoying sound. Don't people know that I'm busy?

Wonder who it is.

Oh.

“Hey.”

WHAT? WHAT? “Cal?”

He's just standing there, as if the last six months haven't happened.

“How are you?”

How am I? HOW AM I? Are you for real?

“Can I come in, Jo?”

NO. Oh... well... when you look at me like that, I suppose...

“Thanks, Jo. I'll get the door. Don't want to let the cold in.”

Why the hell did I let him in? “Cal... why are you here?”

“For you.”

Oh... NO. Don't rise to it. “Cal... I'm busy right now.”

“I can see. You'v


Swell. And finally, for *outsidelogic's contest on interpreting his drawing:

A Brave Little Girl
A brave little girl stood watching the house
Waiting for horrid Miss Modge to come out.
Because of the ring she now clasped in her hand:
The ring that she'd secretly snuck out the house.

The ring! It had glistened so pretty and bright!
It sparkled and shone as it lay in the light.
The horrid old woman could not understand.
That ring could not belong to Modge. 'Twas too bright.

Before she could see the old hag at the door
A lurch in her hand made her trip to the floor.
Before she could squeal, she felt in her hand,
The pretty ring growing – look there, at the door!

Old Miss Modge! Reaching out the threshold!
Her face all deformed with


Many thanks to everyone involved for hosting these. I know they're difficult to organise and see through to the end. And the prompts helped me out of what seemed at the time to be a real dry spell.


3) RETHSVALE!

I uploaded this flash-fic-come-teaser-thing for my planned NaNo story for this year, continuing the continuity that I wrote about last November:

Rethsvale - ZenThe trees were sparsely spread. The ground between them was a mess of mud, fallen leaves and twigs, all mixed together by the recently receded rainfall. Occasionally, small puddles were visible, sometimes rippling nervously at a gentle, chill wind blowing between the tree trunks to the west.

There was no sound. The animals that had lived here had abandoned this place. It had become too dangerous – too dangerous for all but the insects that continued their burrowing underfoot and underground.

Zen was no longer at peace.

From the shadows cast by the boughs of the trees, a hum began to emit. It was almost imperceptible. The darkness aro


If you are following me on DA and you haven't come across my extended project entitled 'Rethsvale', I encourage you to give it a whirl. It's pretty cheesy stuff, and barely original, but I enjoy it. And it's little snippets like this that make me feel like November's gonna be an exciting time for this story.


All that's left for me to say is: many, many thanks for reading, and for all your support. I can't tell you how blessed I am to be part of such an encouraging, honest and positive community on DA. You're all incredibly special people and friends.

Until next time. :hug:

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=Foxface27 May 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the watch! :D And for looking at my profile.
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~Ja-mes May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
And you mine! All the best. :)
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~DrMario08 May 2, 2013  Student Writer
Thx for the :+devwatch:! :)
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~Ja-mes May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! You too. :D
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~Chaotix010 Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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Sorry, but it must be done.
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Mood: Joy ~WimpyBookworm101 Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the Llama Badge!! Much appreciated. :)
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~Ja-mes Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for reading my scribblings! Much obliged. :squee:
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Great stuff you have, man! Keep it up!
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~Ja-mes Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, thank you very much! Always nice to be complimented. :)
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:icongoodbye-43:
Oh, you're welcome, dude! What I've read so far is very fun to read and you capture people quite fantastically. So, yeah, keep on writing. :D
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